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[JUSTIFY]我,兼職的牧羊人──[/JUSTIFY]
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[JUSTIFY]空氣被煩燥煮成悶熱的氣息
風不知被什麼綁架
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[JUSTIFY]讓人不安輾轉

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[JUSTIFY]我在四方之地東望西看[/JUSTIFY]
[JUSTIFY]找不到自在的姿態[/JUSTIFY]
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[JUSTIFY]我一心 想穿越幽幽平靜的關隘[/JUSTIFY]
[JUSTIFY]眼前── [/JUSTIFY]
[JUSTIFY]卻有隻吼聲隆隆的活石獅 把守[/JUSTIFY]
[JUSTIFY]嚇阻我不要越雷池一步[/JUSTIFY]
[JUSTIFY]我身後的羊群 [/JUSTIFY][JUSTIFY]咩咩──聲聲安慰[/JUSTIFY]
[JUSTIFY]無奈 眼睜睜看著[/JUSTIFY]
[JUSTIFY]那隻 石獅一口呑食我的羊隻[/JUSTIFY]
[JUSTIFY]一隻羊、二隻羊、三隻羊……[/JUSTIFY]
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[JUSTIFY]不知何時 竟 有機可趁[/JUSTIFY]
[JUSTIFY]但──[/JUSTIFY]
[JUSTIFY]我和我的羊群走散[/JUSTIFY]
[JUSTIFY]一無所有 躡足偷渡入關[/JUSTIFY]
[JUSTIFY]不知自己身在何方[/JUSTIFY]
[JUSTIFY]逗留幾許[/JUSTIFY]
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[JUSTIFY]一陣兵荒馬亂[/JUSTIFY]
[JUSTIFY]官差一把抓起我 狠狠被一腳踢出[/JUSTIFY]
[JUSTIFY]一時驚魂未定[/JUSTIFY]
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[JUSTIFY]定神一看,[/JUSTIFY]
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[JUSTIFY]原來......[/JUSTIFY]
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[JUSTIFY]我──[/JUSTIFY]
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[JUSTIFY]又回到,那──[/JUSTIFY]
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[JUSTIFY]......四方之地[/JUSTIFY]
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[JUSTIFY]by 宸曲 2009/3/4[/JUSTIFY]
[JUSTIFY]/我,兼職的牧羊人──/[/JUSTIFY][JUSTIFY] [/JUSTIFY][JUSTIFY]第一句開頭很棒喔[/JUSTIFY][JUSTIFY]隱隱約約的帶出失眠時數羊的苦...[/JUSTIFY][JUSTIFY] [/JUSTIFY][JUSTIFY] [/JUSTIFY][JUSTIFY]白亞讀詩[/JUSTIFY]
白亞 寫:[JUSTIFY]/我,兼職的牧羊人──/[/JUSTIFY][JUSTIFY][/JUSTIFY][JUSTIFY]第一句開頭很棒喔[/JUSTIFY][JUSTIFY]隱隱約約的帶出失眠時數羊的苦...[/JUSTIFY][JUSTIFY][/JUSTIFY][JUSTIFY][/JUSTIFY][JUSTIFY]白亞讀詩[/JUSTIFY]


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