失溫

[孩子]

夜靜至冰點
眼神向上攀升
呼吸下沉
沉默

冷
床於是打著哆嗦顫抖
被子不停竄動
枕頭流淚想起另一個枕頭的胸口

失溫
所幸再焚燒一個長夢

[姓韓者]

夜靜至冰點
眼神向上攀升
呼吸下沉
沉默

冷
床於是打著哆嗦顫抖
被子不停竄動
枕頭流淚想起另一個枕頭的胸口

失溫
所幸再焚燒一個長夢

don't just mention the feeling you have
but also express the scene of your emotional world you harboured inside you heart (not your brain)

However, I am really cold while sitting in front of this computer... (冷吱吱)