Happiness and angry樂與怒

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版主: 林宇軒謝予騰綠豆黃木擇袁丞修非白

Happiness and angry樂與怒

Why my happiness seems so quietly.
Feel alike angry around my apearance.
I guess something must happend now.
Leave you or cast the sadness away.
My heart deep inside wanna peace.
A little angry peace about my crying.

為何我的快樂顯得如此安靜
感覺就像憤怒在我外表周圍
我猜測有些事情現在會發生
離開你或是拋棄傷心
我心深處渴望和平
一些關於我哭泣的憤怒和平
紫陌 寫:Happiness and angry樂與怒

Why my happiness seems so quietly.
Feel alike angry around my apearance.
I guess something must happend now.
Leave you or cast the sadness away.
My heart deep inside wanna peace.
A little angry peace about my crying.

為何我的快樂顯得如此安靜
感覺就像憤怒在我外表周圍
我猜測有些事情現在會發生
離開你或是拋棄傷心
我心深處渴望和平
一些關於我哭泣的憤怒和平
Why does my happiness seem so quiet?
Feeling like there's anger around me.
I guess something is gonna happen now.
Leaving you or sadness.
I just want some peace inside my heart deeply.
A little anger and peace about my crying.

最後一句不是很懂陌的憤怒和平,但優先把它們作為兩個字(而不是用憤怒形容和平)

詩題的話,因為happiness是名詞,所以angry應改為anger喔!

問好,祝平安:)

嗯~我是想表達一種情緒,類似憤怒中的和平,亦或和平中的憤怒。
要改成anger,i know^^
還有一個小地方,appearance少打了一個p
後來才發現的。
謝优^^