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Hmm...very strange spacing...
Would you fix that?

Or you did it on purpose?

sharline1031 寫:A man asks his wife
"Sometimes I just don't understand
Why I always chase after love, in a hard way
But always find that love is still running to somewhere that I haven't been to."
His wife answers
"That is marriage."

Okay, that's better.

To be honest, I don't find this poem particularly creative.
After reading this, it sort of gives you a feeling like, "Uh well, okay, so?"

I'm not married, not yet.
But I really think that chasing after love after beeing married sounds really odd.
Is that guy in the poem not in love with his wife or are you saying their love is fading away?

Overall, a logical poem.
Thant's all.

I would expect something more deviant.