The Candle
發表於 : 週四 8月 16, 2012 6:40 pm
How brave of you
To plot with me
To bite back the night
To plot with me
To bite back the night
The plot is brilliant,
and the candle is bright.
Well done, man!
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Re: The Candle
發表於 : 週四 8月 16, 2012 7:40 pm
Very very clever image!
The plot is brilliant,
and the candle is bright.
Well done, man!
The plot is brilliant,
and the candle is bright.
Well done, man!
Re: The Candle
發表於 : 週六 8月 18, 2012 10:20 pm
Thanks!
And it's certainly one of my most satisfactory poems recently!
And it's certainly one of my most satisfactory poems recently!
Re: The Candle
發表於 : 週五 8月 24, 2012 4:07 pm
I like the last sentence.
It pictured how the flame shines during the night.
It pictured how the flame shines during the night.
Re: The Candle
發表於 : 週一 8月 27, 2012 10:14 pm
Thank you 葉優!
It is exactly the picture that I intend to show by this poem!
It is exactly the picture that I intend to show by this poem!