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試追一年情詩─Oh, Pretty Woman

Oh, pretty woman,
May you be you,
Evil or cruel,
Or a blade, sink into me deeply.

Oh, pretty woman,
You need not be mine,
But let me be yours.
Please usurp me entirely,
May you be you, don’t leave me.

Oh, pretty woman,
My mind would love
To die in your embrace.
Pretty woman,
May one day my dreams end,
Til then wake me not,
In slumber I shall remain;

Oh, pretty woman,
For only there, you remain.

初稿　2010/07/25

I like the 3rd paragraph, interesting break and twist.

(nodding)

Thank you. I do think the third paragraph is quite important to make the whole thing work. It's like the movie "The Sixth Sense" when Bruce Willis found out that he was already dead.

Lennex