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This Titled Night

發表於 : 週二 11月 07, 2006 9:34 am
馬雲程
A piece of moon,
like a wolf-tooth, bright and smooth,
hiding behind the cloudiness,
te be described as the Title of the Night.

The colour of the wind
is distorting its shape of sin,
like a greedy eagle
struggling with its final battle.

Re: This Titled Night

發表於 : 週一 11月 20, 2006 8:11 pm
喬叟
馬雲程 寫:A piece of moon,
like a wolf-tooth, bright and smooth,
hiding behind the cloudiness,
te be described as the Title of the Night.
(1)Similar to my previous post of your other poem, the first stanza is an incomplete sentence.

(2) Typo: te --> to