喜菡文學網

發表於 : **週三 9月 27, 2006 5:44 am**

I love you...
Floats from my mouth
like petals of a flower
sailing
downstream to you.

And nothing
can slow this journey
as love's force
gently pushes me along
even past dry banks
where others have settled down
to hope no more.

Span the distance
of admiration
where color caught your eye
and wade these waters
to hold me in your hand.

發表於 : **週一 11月 20, 2006 9:46 pm**

A rare gem in a Chinese language website. The first two stanza are just lovely. The 3rd is a tad awkward, probably can benefit from rewriting. This is so commendable because you are also superb with your Chinese poems.

喜菡文學網

I Love You

I Love You

Well Done!