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The sound was calling me,
the echo from the Sea
This is the day,
the memories recording without feedback

Let his life be
Let my life free
I wrote his name upon the strand,
but the waves washed it away
I drew my heart upon the air,
but the wind carried it away
No – yet still unchangeable

The echo leaded me with the footprint,
and the sands kept smile to me
I opened my arms to huge the sea
The sea said:
Honey, you catch the feeling of the free
It is about it, remember it


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Hi !!:

*A few simple grammatical mistakes:

The echo led me with (her?) footprints,
and the sands kept smile to me (kept smiling)
I opened my arms to huge the sea (hug)
The sea said:
Honey, you catch the feeling of the free (caught? or, have caught)
It is about it, remember it

*Good try at writing in English. Keep at it.

ZY