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Mama

Mama give me something warm.
Mama love me like the whisper.
Mama,her love in the drakness night.
Mama,her love in the lightness day.
I glance at mama's eyes.
See something get far away and old.

P.S這首英文詩雖很淺白，但是給我母親的，如有不對的地方，拜託指正，謝謝。

很喜歡這首
紫陌加油喔^ ^

PS:問題私訊再談

Mama

Mama gives me something warm. (三單)
Mama loves me like the whisper. (三單)
Mama, her love in the drakness night. (少了主詞)
Mama, her love in the lightness day. (少了主詞)
I glance at mama's eyes and
See something getting far away and old.

紫陌：
草草幫妳改了一下。

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