Dear Cauchy3,

Welcome to our little corner for English poems.

I am afraid I have some difficulty grasping what you are trying to express, and I think part of it is language.

For example:

"Look forward to with attentions of evils." is not a complete sentence.

"Sink and fly is one over cast." is grammatically incorrect and not clear in meaning.

"Poor strengths are died intelligence." is also incorrect. (I guess you meant "dead intelligence"?)


"Filled honors are gold worms.
.......
Sky walkers are years of sands.
Rickets are ancient round jades."

I almost want to guess that these sentences are very direct translation of Chinese sentnces. I am sorry to say that they really don't make good English and need more work.

I have to appologize that I had a hard time responding to these poems of yours because I just don't grasp them, and not far a lack of effort--I read each of them several times.

Please do not take my comments as in any way a slight of your poems. Communication can often be an issue for poetry, and it can be due to either the author or the audience.

I want to offer you a welcome regardless.

ZY