DREAM

[路痕]

[CENTER]What i am grateful is[/CENTER]
[CENTER]You stop by my humble place[/CENTER]
[CENTER]Contained only you and me[/CENTER]
[CENTER]We did nothing[/CENTER]
[CENTER]Except love keeps emerging like a spring[/CENTER]
[CENTER]yes, not even by a word[/CENTER]
[CENTER]we fell into a romantic story[/CENTER]
[CENTER]The stars talking with the unsettled fireflies,[/CENTER]
[CENTER]The wind of the night entangling[/CENTER]
[CENTER]With the legends, everything wonderful[/CENTER]
[CENTER]In the world blossoms at the twinkling[/CENTER]
[CENTER]of the first vision.[/CENTER]
[CENTER]I wanna elope with you but no need [/CENTER]
[CENTER]Of the excuse of no place may walk[/CENTER]
[CENTER] [/CENTER]
[CENTER]The most beautiful place exists[/CENTER]
[CENTER]At theside of your mouth while[/CENTER]
[CENTER]Smiling and in my eyes where the tears welling up.[/CENTER]
[CENTER]etermity,hence,appears in a flash...[/CENTER]

[麵糰仔]

There are some clever images and metaphors that I really like in this poem.
The spring, the fireflies, and a brilliant ending make the poem enjoyable to read.

Despite some grammatical errors (that I actually want you to fix), this poem is pretty nice!

Thank you for sharing!