Bang bang , my baby shot me down !

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版主: 林宇軒謝予騰綠豆黃木擇袁丞修非白

1.
我確定她活我裏面
日間
我扎蒼蠅的紅腦袋、替横樑雕刻紋身
意淫熱褲、迷信狐仙
晚上
我聽輕爵士、聞茉莉的體香
讀愛人的網誌、洗手、抺乾煙味
拒絶閃光
2
夏天就快過去
自戀的小獸還從南到北地魚貫入場
他們是活脫脫的,血跡斑斑的一群
喜歡傾斜的電話亭
喜歡站在角子機廣大而失去焦距的燥音內
我只記得
八月櫥窗內的夏風有點異常
紅墨汁塗滿了他們的身體
玻璃彈珠沙沙地在稿紙上分裂
我覺得1比2來得節制
達到的效果也較好

2的有些句子好像略略失焦了
一直覺得這是首很令人著迷的歌。因此雖然不是非常確定
詩題和歌詞是否有關聯,還是將歌詞列出供讀者參考。

問好米米!


Bang Bang (My Baby Shot Me Down)

I was five and he was six
We rode on horses made of sticks
He wore black and I wore white
He would always win the fight

Bang bang, he shot me down
Bang bang, I hit the ground
Bang bang, that awful sound
Bang bang, my baby shot me down.

Seasons came and changed the time
When I grew up, I called him mine
He would always laugh and say
"Remember when we used to play?"

Bang bang, I shot you down
Bang bang, you hit the ground
Bang bang, that awful sound
Bang bang, I used to shoot you down.

Music played, and people sang
Just for me, the church bells rang.

Now he's gone, I don't know why
And till this day, sometimes I cry
He didn't even say goodbye
He didn't take the time to lie.

Bang bang, he shot me down
Bang bang, I hit the ground
Bang bang, that awful sound
Bang bang, my baby shot me down...
某 日下午重看
重慶森林
失戀
可以完全擊倒一個人
感謝兩位美女來讀