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版主: 林宇軒謝予騰綠豆黃木擇袁丞修非白

If you can hear me,

let me tell you

what Im thinking.



If you miss me,

plz call the name

which you gave to me.



If you still like me,

we shall hug

and kiss until the last minute.



If you can be with me,

just stay

dun ever go away.



*If time can go back,

Id still want to meet you again

fall for you

and do all things I did for you.
用的是美國口語英文
所以有些字的拼法跟我們正常用的有些不同
例如: dun=dont,plz=please

這篇主角仍是Cat
if you can come back

i will fly to you.

when can we meet?my dear cat.
敏容 寫:if you can come back

i will fly to you.

when can we meet?my dear cat.
wait! Don't forget me ok?! :cry:
hello.hom-e

sure,no problem.

where do you live?

are you a student?

thank you.
敏容 寫:hello.hom-e

sure,no problem.

where do you live?

are you a student?

thank you.
哈..忘了說吼!
我呀--東吳四年級
這邊角落挺溫暖的呢!
讓我窩一下吧!哈..

優~~

記得我!噗~~等妳囉 :lol:
敏容 寫:if you can come back

i will fly to you.

when can we meet?my dear cat.
不是很懂
敏容姐姐是幫我加上一段
還是單純對優問話??

優詩中的Cat是另外一個人
他也在美國AZ的
怎麼大家都留英文啊= =a

看哪天優有那個命回到台灣

大家再約出來聚一聚吧

煮壺花果茶配上幾盤蛋糕點心

女人家有女人家的"文學"=P
琉璃貓.優 寫:怎麼大家都留英文啊= =a

看哪天優有那個命回到台灣

大家再約出來聚一聚吧

煮壺花果茶配上幾盤蛋糕點心

女人家有女人家的"文學"=P
唉~~偶明天就要揮氣台灣的蒐...
妳快回來呀^^
笨孟

機票拿來先

琉璃貓.優 寫:機票拿來先
噗~~我什麼都有..
就是沒"摳摳"呀=..=
我娘逼我去的=.=
機票要先用刷卡的..
下個月薪水到..帳單也剛好到..孟娘云

口連的笨孟

回來寫篇台北遊記吧!

妳好久沒新作品
別因為一些不愉快的事件荒廢囉!

好有趣的詩
可惜我的英文不太行

用英文寫詩
那就更會要了我的命了

你好利害

嗯嗯...你過獎了!

優的英文詩其實很不成熟

只是剛開始學著做...><"