老新郎的禱告(楊振寧)

[倚馬]

Prayer of an old bridegroom

A beautiful lily is in her prime
Admiration and desire fills the heart of mine
Listen to the church bells’ merry chime
Pray the lord spare me a few more years of time.


P.S. Dr. Young marries a 28 years old student at 82.

[劉哲廷]

他們的愛或許不被祝福，但至少他們彼此擁有彼此
我想，這就夠了－－

倚馬首句寫出／A beautiful lily is in her prime，正與Dr. Young形容翁帆為「上帝恩賜的最後禮物，給我的老靈魂，一個重回青春的歡喜。」有著相同的美

但詩的展延性不足，可以再寫更多的「點」
四句一則，在此顯些意猶未盡



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